全日制研究生的学位论文啊——写成这样！让我说什么好呢……

在摘要里论文作者介绍说，其论文的“第三部分为巴比特的中年危机拉开了序幕。……第五部分巴比特的中年危机渐渐落下了帷幕”。【孩喳，这是学术论文的表述吗？】

还有好多不知所云的话，完全搞不清逻辑关系，甚至还有低级的语法错误：

1. The first critical approach that is most used and dominant is characterized by a label of political and economic fiction with social significance.
2. Although the story took place in London and Paris before and during the French Revolution, this very first sentence has already set the tone for America in the 1920s in which Babbitt was created.
3. As it mentioned … …
4. We’d better to know … …
5. there is one thing cannot be left without saying when talking … …
6. ………………

真实折磨啊~~~

不过这些句子方面的问题还算小。各种论述结构方面的问题要严重的多。

而其最最严重的问题是，整篇论文没有明确的论述核心，没有thesis statement，这是造成其一切混乱的根源。

没有核心观点的论文还叫论文吗？

我都有点儿迷茫了——我是该较真儿啊，还是该较真儿啊，还是该较真儿啊？……